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IB Environmental systems and societies (ESS) SL Internal Assessment Example

To what extent do different age groups 10–24, 25–34, 35–44, 45+ in Kaptembwa ward,Nakuru county differ in their household recycling behavior?To what extent do different age groups 10–24, 25–34, 35–44, 45+ in Kaptembwa ward,Nakuru county differ in their household recycling behavior?SL

Official IB Result

IB Grade: 7

Criteria A: A: Research question and inquiry

3/4

Criteria StrandsPro

A.1Research question and inquiry

Excellent

Criteria Feedback

You state a focused, geographically bounded question that is clearly linked to a real local environmental issue.
Your background research gives useful context on waste, pollution and health impacts, which supports the rationale for the investigation.

Some background claims would be stronger with clearer sourcing or more precise explanation.
A few sentences repeat the aim without adding enough detail about why age is the key variable to investigate.

Criteria B: B: Strategy

2/4

Criteria StrandsPro

B.1Strategy

Excellent

Criteria Feedback

You identify a relevant existing strategy and link it directly to the environmental issue in your question.
You explain tensions between different stakeholders rather than just naming perspectives, which strengthens your discussion.

A few claims about how different groups respond to the strategy are stated too confidently without direct evidence from your investigation.
Some wording would be stronger if it clearly separated expectation or hypothesis from what your data actually shows.

Criteria C: C: Method

4/4

Criteria StrandsPro

C.1Method

Good

Criteria Feedback

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Criteria D: D: Treatment of data

5/6

Criteria StrandsPro

D.1Treatment of data

Poor

Criteria Feedback

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Criteria E: E: Analysis and conclusion

6/6

Criteria StrandsPro

E.1Analysis and conclusion

Poor

Criteria Feedback

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Criteria F: F: Evaluation

4/6

Criteria StrandsPro

F.1Evaluation

Moderate

Criteria Feedback

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Official IB Result

IB Grade: 7

Criteria A: A: Research question and inquiry

3/4

Criteria StrandsPro

A.1Research question and inquiry

Excellent

Criteria Feedback

You state a focused, geographically bounded question that is clearly linked to a real local environmental issue.
Your background research gives useful context on waste, pollution and health impacts, which supports the rationale for the investigation.

Some background claims would be stronger with clearer sourcing or more precise explanation.
A few sentences repeat the aim without adding enough detail about why age is the key variable to investigate.

Criteria B: B: Strategy

2/4

Criteria StrandsPro

B.1Strategy

Excellent

Criteria Feedback

You identify a relevant existing strategy and link it directly to the environmental issue in your question.
You explain tensions between different stakeholders rather than just naming perspectives, which strengthens your discussion.

A few claims about how different groups respond to the strategy are stated too confidently without direct evidence from your investigation.
Some wording would be stronger if it clearly separated expectation or hypothesis from what your data actually shows.

Criteria C: C: Method

4/4

Criteria StrandsPro

C.1Method

Good

Criteria Feedback

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Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat.

Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur.
Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum.

Criteria D: D: Treatment of data

5/6

Criteria StrandsPro

D.1Treatment of data

Poor

Criteria Feedback

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Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat.

Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur.
Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum.

Criteria E: E: Analysis and conclusion

6/6

Criteria StrandsPro

E.1Analysis and conclusion

Poor

Criteria Feedback

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Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat.

Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur.
Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum.

Criteria F: F: Evaluation

4/6

Criteria StrandsPro

F.1Evaluation

Moderate

Criteria Feedback

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Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat.

Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur.
Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum.