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IB Environmental systems and societies (ESS) - Old SL Internal Assessment Example
To what extent the awareness of female and male students of Kolej MARA Banting
towards consumption of plant-based milk having less impact on soil erosion compared to animal-based milk?SL
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Overall Score
21/30
Criteria A: Identifying the Context (CXT)
3/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
A.1Research question formulation
Moderate
A.2Environmental issue context
Moderate
A.3Connection between issue and research
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
Clear research question with evident variables and scope
Provides contextual framing of soil erosion linked to dairy vs plant-based milk
Cites relevant sources to support the environmental context
Cumbersome phrasing and minor ambiguity in the research question
Lacks localized or Malaysian-specific data to deepen context
Connections between the environmental issue and question are described but not fully systematic
Criteria B: Planning (PLA)
5/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
B.1Method design
Good
B.2Sampling strategy
Moderate
B.3Risk and ethical considerations
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
Well-designed, repeatable survey method with pilot testing incorporated
Variables are clearly identified and a Likert coding system is established
Sampling strategy is justified using the Central Limit Theorem
Insufficient detail on survey distribution channels, follow-up reminders, and data cleaning
Randomization procedure and handling of non-response bias are not explained
Risk assessment omits data security, backup procedures, and deeper ethical safeguards
Criteria C: Results, Analysis and Conclusion (RAC)
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
C.1Data presentation
Moderate
C.2Data analysis
Good
C.3Conclusion drawing
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Discussion and Evaluation (DEV)
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
D.1Conclusion evaluation
Moderate
D.2Method evaluation
Good
D.3Improvements and extensions
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria E: Applications (APP)
3/3
0
2
3
Criteria Strands
E.1Application proposal
Good
E.2Solution evaluation
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria F: Communication (COM)
2/3
0
2
3
Criteria Strands
F.1Structure and organization
Good
F.2Terminology and concision
Good
F.3Logic and coherence
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum.