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IB Environmental systems and societies (ESS) - Old HL Internal Assessment Example
To What Extent Are Residents Of Different Genders From Kampung Padang Tokla, Pasir Mas Aware Of The Air Pollution Effects From Stubble Burning Activities In Kelantan, Malaysia As Measured By The Self-Report Approach?HL
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Overall Score
25/30
Criteria A: Identifying the Context (CXT)
5/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
A.1Research question formulation
Excellent
A.2Environmental issue context
Excellent
A.3Connection between issue and research
Good
Criteria Feedback
The research question is clearly stated, focused, and specifies population, variables, and measurement approach
Background provides extensive and relevant context on stubble burning, pollutant trends, and health impacts
Figures and regional API data effectively situate the environmental issue in the study locale
The linkage between pollutant trends and the gender‐awareness focus is descriptive and could better explain why gender differences might emerge locally
Some redundancy in wording of the research question appears without adding clarity
Criteria B: Planning (PLA)
5/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
B.1Method design
Excellent
B.2Sampling strategy
Good
B.3Risk and ethical considerations
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
Methodology is detailed and repeatable, with a bilingual Likert‐scale survey, pilot test, and clear variables table
Sample size rationale references the Central Limit Theorem and balanced gender quotas
Risk and ethical considerations are outlined, with steps to ensure anonymity and informed participation
Sampling strategy justification is basic and does not fully address randomization or population framing
Ethical section omits data security procedures and deeper cultural sensitivity considerations
Rationale for using self‐report surveys could be better linked to capturing awareness differences
Criteria C: Results, Analysis and Conclusion (RAC)
6/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
C.1Data presentation
Good
C.2Data analysis
Excellent
C.3Conclusion drawing
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Discussion and Evaluation (DEV)
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
D.1Conclusion evaluation
Good
D.2Method evaluation
Moderate
D.3Improvements and extensions
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria E: Applications (APP)
3/3
0
2
3
Criteria Strands
E.1Application proposal
Excellent
E.2Solution evaluation
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria F: Communication (COM)
2/3
0
2
3
Criteria Strands
F.1Structure and organization
Good
F.2Terminology and concision
Good
F.3Logic and coherence
Good
Criteria Feedback
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