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IB Environmental systems and societies (ESS) - Old SL Internal Assessment Example
How does the distance from agricultural deforestation edges (0m, 10m, 20m, 30m,
40m) at El Chino, Peru, influence potassium levels in the soil of the adjacent
Amazon Rainforest?SL
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Overall Score
23/30
Criteria A: Identifying the Context (CXT)
5/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
A.1Research question formulation
Excellent
A.2Environmental issue context
Excellent
A.3Connection between issue and research
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
Precise, focused research question specifying location, gradient intervals, and soil potassium measure
Detailed environmental context on Amazonian soil nutrient dynamics, leaching and regional deforestation with citations
Clear causal explanation linking canopy removal and nutrient depletion to the distance gradient
Minor stylistic repetition in phrasing of ‘agricultural deforestation edges’
Could expand discussion of indigenous land‐use history for deeper contextual richness
Criteria B: Planning (PLA)
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
B.1Method design
Excellent
B.2Sampling strategy
Good
B.3Risk and ethical considerations
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
Method is detailed and repeatable, with specified equipment, depths, spacing, maps and diagrams
Comprehensive risk and ethical assessment addressing PPE, landowner consent, organism relocation, and waste disposal
Sampling rationale lacks justification for transect number and 10 m step size
Controlled variables are listed without justification
Temperature monitoring frequency/instrument detail and sample timing schedule are omitted
Criteria C: Results, Analysis and Conclusion (RAC)
5/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
C.1Data presentation
Excellent
C.2Data analysis
Excellent
C.3Conclusion drawing
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Discussion and Evaluation (DEV)
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
D.1Conclusion evaluation
Good
D.2Method evaluation
Moderate
D.3Improvements and extensions
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria E: Applications (APP)
2/3
0
2
3
Criteria Strands
E.1Application proposal
Excellent
E.2Solution evaluation
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria F: Communication (COM)
3/3
0
2
3
Criteria Strands
F.1Structure and organization
Excellent
F.2Terminology and concision
Excellent
F.3Logic and coherence
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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