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IB Environmental systems and societies (ESS) - Old SL Internal Assessment Example
How does increasing soil salinity (NaCl) concentration (0g /L, 5g /L, 10g /L, 20 g /L, 30 g/L (±0.01 g)) affect the growth of maize (Zea mays) measured through stem height in cm in 15 days?SL
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Overall Score
25/30
Criteria A: Identifying the Context (CXT)
6/6
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3
6
Criteria Strands
A.1Research question formulation
Excellent
A.2Environmental issue context
Excellent
A.3Connection between issue and research
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
The research question is clear, measurable and focused, specifying IV (five NaCl concentrations), DV (stem height in cm) and timeframe (15 days).
Explicit linkage between soil salinity, osmotic stress and maize yield is explained, contextualized with Trans-Nzoia farmers and national food security.
Introduction provides extensive local and global context, quantifying salinity-affected land and yield losses with multiple references.
A minor inconsistency in the pH change description (“increasing from 5.8–6.0 to less than 5.8”) needs verification.
One citation in the introduction is incomplete and some statistics lack full referencing, slightly weakening the scholarly apparatus.
Criteria B: Planning (PLA)
5/6
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3
6
Criteria Strands
B.1Method design
Excellent
B.2Sampling strategy
Excellent
B.3Risk and ethical considerations
Poor
Criteria Feedback
Method is detailed and repeatable with clear volumes, masses and timing, capable of generating sufficient data.
Sampling strategy is justified, with five replicates per treatment and rationale for salinity levels (mild, moderate, high) and control treatment.
Control of variables (soil mass, watering schedule) is outlined in a structured table.
Risk and ethical considerations are omitted; handling of NaCl solutions and ergonomic hazards are not addressed.
Control variables table lists “Water” twice and omits units for light intensity; standardization and specification (e.g., µmol·m⁻²·s⁻¹) are needed.
Criteria C: Results, Analysis and Conclusion (RAC)
5/6
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3
6
Criteria Strands
C.1Data presentation
Moderate
C.2Data analysis
Good
C.3Conclusion drawing
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Discussion and Evaluation (DEV)
4/6
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3
6
Criteria Strands
D.1Conclusion evaluation
Moderate
D.2Method evaluation
Moderate
D.3Improvements and extensions
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria E: Applications (APP)
3/3
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2
3
Criteria Strands
E.1Application proposal
Excellent
E.2Solution evaluation
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria F: Communication (COM)
2/3
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2
3
Criteria Strands
F.1Structure and organization
Excellent
F.2Terminology and concision
Good
F.3Logic and coherence
Good
Criteria Feedback
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