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IB Environmental systems and societies (ESS) - Old SL Internal Assessment Example
How does age group in Petaling Jaya, Selangor influence the level of awareness, in terms of knowledge and practice, on the disposal of batteries to reduce E-waste in order to prevent groundwater pollution?SL
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Overall Score
22/30
Criteria A: Identifying the Context (CXT)
5/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
A.1Research question formulation
Excellent
A.2Environmental issue context
Excellent
A.3Connection between issue and research
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
Clear, focused research question with specific variables and geographical context
Sustained, quantitative local and international environmental issue context
Comprehensive explanation of connections between age-related awareness and groundwater contamination
The research question wording is somewhat wordy
Minor suggestions to tighten causal-chain phrasing
Criteria B: Planning (PLA)
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
B.1Method design
Excellent
B.2Sampling strategy
Excellent
B.3Risk and ethical considerations
Good
Criteria Feedback
Well-detailed, repeatable questionnaire method with clear statistical plan
Justified quota sampling strategy tied to population strata
Ethical considerations (anonymity, pilot testing) outlined
Omission of data-cleaning procedures for missing responses
Control variable section lacks mention of key confounders (e.g., education, gender)
Ethical/risk discussion omits data security and emotional discomfort
Criteria C: Results, Analysis and Conclusion (RAC)
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
C.1Data presentation
Excellent
C.2Data analysis
Excellent
C.3Conclusion drawing
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Discussion and Evaluation (DEV)
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
D.1Conclusion evaluation
Good
D.2Method evaluation
Good
D.3Improvements and extensions
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria E: Applications (APP)
3/3
0
2
3
Criteria Strands
E.1Application proposal
Excellent
E.2Solution evaluation
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria F: Communication (COM)
2/3
0
2
3
Criteria Strands
F.1Structure and organization
Excellent
F.2Terminology and concision
Good
F.3Logic and coherence
Good
Criteria Feedback
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