The Midnight LibrarySL
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6
Official IB Result
IB Grade: 6
Criteria A: Language
12/12
0
6
12
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Vocabulary usage and appropriateness
Poor
A.2Grammatical structure variety and complexity
Poor
A.3Language accuracy and communication effectiveness
Poor
A.4Pronunciation and intonation
Poor
Criteria Feedback
- The student uses a range of vocabulary that is clearly linked to the text’s ideas and themes.
- The student attempts more advanced sentence patterns, including explanation, comparison, and conditional ideas.
- The student's meaning is usually understandable even when the sentence structure becomes more ambitious.
- Some word choice is unnatural or imprecise, which makes parts of the student's explanation less clear.
- Complex sentences are often not fully controlled, leading to fragments and awkward phrasing.
- There is frequent repetition of general phrases, so the student's language is not always varied or polished.
Criteria B: Message—Literary Extract
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Relevance to literary extract
Good
B.2Use of extract and development of observations
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
- The student stays focused on the extract’s central ideas, especially regret, identity, and self-acceptance.
- The student includes relevant quotations and identifies at least one authorial choice, such as repetition.
- The student shows an understanding of how Mrs. Elm’s advice connects to Nora’s development.
- Some points stay general and are not always tied closely enough to the wording of the extract.
- The student's analysis is sometimes repetitive rather than progressively developed.
- A few references become unclear or imprecise, which weakens the precision of the student's commentary.
Criteria C: Message—Conversation
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Response relevance and appropriateness
Moderate
C.2Response development and depth
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Interactive Skills—Communication
6/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Comprehension and interaction quality
Moderate
D.2Response provision and participation
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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