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IB English A Lang & Lit HL HL Essay Example
How does Gabriel Márquez García, in his novel
Chronicles of a Death Foretold, use the motif of obsessive honour to
critique societal norms and cultural values that justify violence
in a Latin-American context?HL
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7
Official IB Result
IB Grade: 7
Criteria A: Knowledge, Understanding and Interpretation
5/5
0
3
5
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Knowledge and understanding of the work/text
Excellent
A.2Use of references and textual support
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
The student shows a solid understanding of the novel’s central concerns and keeps returning to honour, violence, gender, and communal complicity.
The student uses a substantial range of relevant textual references to support their argument.
The student's interpretation usually stays anchored in the text and shows clear awareness of the novel’s social critique.
Some claims broaden the novel’s critique too far beyond the specific social world represented in the text.
A few references are not handled with enough precision, which weakens the force of the student's interpretation.
The external material the student mentions is not woven meaningfully into the literary argument.
Criteria B: Analysis and Evaluation
4/5
0
3
5
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Analysis of textual features and author's choices
Good
Criteria Feedback
The student often connects authorial choices to themes of fatalism, dehumanization, and social complicity.
The student identifies several meaningful techniques, including foreshadowing, imagery, and retrospective narration.
The student's analysis usually attempts to move beyond description into interpretation.
Some technique labels are asserted without enough close explanation of how they work in the text.
Several interpretive claims become speculative when they move beyond what the passage clearly establishes.
The essay sometimes relies on broad evaluative wording rather than detailed analysis of diction, syntax, or structure.
Criteria C: Focus, Organization and Development
5/5
0
3
5
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Organization and development of ideas
Excellent
C.2Integration of supporting examples
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Language
5/5
0
3
5
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Language clarity and accuracy
Good
D.2Register and style appropriateness
Good
Criteria Feedback
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