Overall Score: 11/14
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Criteria A: Diagrams
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Excellent
Diagram inclusion and accuracy
Excellent
Diagram explanation
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- Inclusion of two accurate, clearly labelled AD/AS diagrams with all essential elements (axes, curves, equilibrium points, gaps).
- Full and precise explanation of diagram mechanics linking curve shifts to price level and real GDP changes.
- Effective reference to each diagram in the text (“Diagram 1” and “Diagram 2”), showing integration of visuals and commentary.
- Diagram 2 omits a dashed LRAS1→LRAS2 shift to illustrate long-run supply effects.
- Minor suggestion: annotate quantitative magnitudes (e.g., shift sizes) to enrich the visual impact.
Criteria B: Terminology
2/2
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Excellent
Use of economic terminology
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- Consistent, appropriate use of macroeconomic terms (e.g., aggregate demand, recessionary gap, multiplier effect).
- Terminology is integrated into analysis rather than listed, supporting clear economic argumentation.
- No significant lapses, but the commentary could briefly define one or two less familiar terms to aid reader comprehension.
Criteria C: Application and Analysis
2/3
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Good
Application of economic theory
Good
Quality of economic analysis
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Criteria D: Key Concept
2/3
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Criteria Strands
Excellent
Identification of key concept
Good
Connection to article
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Criteria E: Evaluation
2/3
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Good
Quality of judgments
Good
Supporting reasoning
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