To what extent does the implementation of facial recognition technology in public spaces in Indonesia impact individual privacy rights and societal trust?HL
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Official IB Result
IB Grade: 4
Criteria A: Inquiry Focus
3/3
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2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Inquiry Focus
Good
Criteria Feedback
- Your inquiry question is clear, focused, and evaluative.
- You connect the issue to a specific Indonesian context with relevant real-world examples.
- You show awareness of several important concepts such as privacy, trust, AI, and data flow.
- Your real-world example is not yet tightly defined and feels a little scattered.
- Some of the conceptual links are introduced broadly rather than explained in a detailed, specific way.
- The rationale would be stronger if you previewed the exact line of inquiry more clearly.
Criteria B: Claims and perspectives
4/6
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3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Claims and perspectives
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
- You discuss three relevant sources rather than relying on a single perspective.
- You identify some useful claims about privacy, consent, legal gaps, efficiency, and public confidence.
- You begin to show why different sources matter to the inquiry by noting their usefulness in different ways.
- Your discussion often summarizes source content more than it examines perspective or purpose.
- The reliability, limitations, and standpoint of each source are not consistently developed.
- Some source discussions need clearer explanation of why that source is especially useful for your inquiry.
Criteria C: Analysis and evaluation
2/6
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C.1Analysis and evaluation
Poor
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Conclusion
0/6
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3
6
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D.1Conclusion
Poor
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria E: Communication
3/3
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2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
E.1Communication
Good
Criteria Feedback
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