To what extent do young adults in New York City perceive the ethical implications of increased surveillance through facial recognition in public spaces?HL
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Official IB Result
IB Grade: 6
Criteria A: Inquiry Focus
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A.1Inquiry Focus
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
- You formulate a clear, focused inquiry question that stays anchored to a specific ethical issue, place, population, and technology.
- You connect the real-world example directly to course concepts such as privacy, consent, fairness, accountability, and power relations.
- You could justify the choice of real-world example even more explicitly by explaining why it is the best fit for the inquiry.
- The distinction between young adults and other groups could be made more precise to strengthen the focus on the target population.
Criteria B: Claims and perspectives
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B.1Claims and perspectives
Excellent
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- You discuss all three sources substantively and identify their differing claims and perspectives.
- You justify each source’s usefulness to the inquiry with clear, source-specific reasoning.
- You show awareness of source limitations and perspective bias rather than treating all evidence as equally neutral.
- Some claims, especially about the NYPD perspective and young adults’ reactions, are more asserted than directly evidenced.
- The discussion could be even stronger if you used more direct quotations or evidence to support competing viewpoints.
Criteria C: Analysis and evaluation
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C.1Analysis and evaluation
Moderate
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Criteria D: Conclusion
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D.1Conclusion
Moderate
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Criteria E: Communication
3/3
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E.1Communication
Excellent
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