To what extent is it more impactful for the Civil Society HUB to redirect their focus on food supply in war situations?HL
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Overall Score
12/25
Criteria A: Integration of a Key Concept
3/5
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3
5
Criteria Strands
A.1Understanding and integration of key concept
Good
A.2Connection to organization
Good
Criteria Feedback
- Clear identification and repeated reference to the key concept of change
- Good initial integration of change in the discussion of CSH’s shift from evacuation to food supply
- Consistent linkage of STEEPLE factors and Ansoff choices back to the concept
- Integration is not fully seamless—the concept drives only portions of the report
- Lacks an explicit theoretical definition or framework of ‘change’
- Some sections (cost tables, STEEPLE subsections) treat change as background rather than analytical thread
Criteria B: Supporting Documents
2/4
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4
Criteria Strands
B.1Number of documents
Good
B.2Relevance and depth
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
- Five distinct and relevant sources meet IA document limits
- Documents provide necessary factual background
- Most sources are used superficially and contribute little depth to argumentation
- References lack peer‐reviewed or official reports to strengthen evidence
- Bibliography has incomplete details for some footnotes
Criteria C: Selection and Application of Tools and Theories
2/4
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2
4
Criteria Strands
C.1Selection of tools and theories
Good
C.2Application and relevance
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Analysis and Evaluation
2/5
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3
5
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D.1Data selection and use
Moderate
D.2Analysis quality
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria E: Conclusions
1/3
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2
3
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E.1Consistency with evidence
Good
E.2Answer to research question
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria F: Structure
1/2
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F.1Organization and structure
Excellent
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Criteria G: Presentation
1/2
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1
2
Criteria Strands
G.1Required elements
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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