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IB Business Management SL Internal Assessment Example
To what extent has Aramco’s acquisition of Valvoline affected its performance?SL
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7
Official IB Result
IB Grade: 7
Criteria A: Integration of a Key Concept
5/5
0
3
5
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Understanding and integration of key concept
Moderate
A.2Connection to organization
Good
Criteria Feedback
The student correctly identifies sustainability and defines it in a way that gives the investigation a clear conceptual starting point.
The student makes a visible link between the concept and Aramco’s financial performance, especially revenue, operating income, and margins.
The student's use of sustainability stays fairly broad and does not fully explain how they are measuring it in this investigation.
The link between the acquisition and the financial changes is asserted more than demonstrated, so the concept is not integrated consistently throughout the discussion.
Criteria B: Supporting Documents
0/4
0
2
4
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Number of documents
Poor
B.2Relevance and depth
Poor
Criteria Feedback
No supporting document set is provided in a form that can be assessed.
A bibliography and in-text citations do not substitute for the required documentary extracts or source portfolio.
Criteria C: Selection and Application of Tools and Theories
4/4
0
2
4
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Selection of tools and theories
Moderate
C.2Application and relevance
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Analysis and Evaluation
5/5
0
3
5
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Data selection and use
Moderate
D.2Analysis quality
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria E: Conclusions
3/3
0
2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
E.1Consistency with evidence
Good
E.2Answer to research question
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria F: Structure
2/2
0
1
2
Criteria StrandsPro
F.1Organization and structure
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria G: Presentation
2/2
0
1
2
Criteria StrandsPro
G.1Required elements
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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