IB Business Management HL Internal Assessment Example

The student keeps the key concept tightly connected to Amazon throughout most of the investigation.

The student shows clear understanding of how strategic change affects different parts of the business, including operations, sustainability, and market position.

The student's discussion often goes beyond description and uses the concept to support real strategic judgments.

The student's definition of the key concept is initially too narrow and should cover the whole business more consistently.

At times, the concept is repeated rather than used to deepen the argument.

Some proposed changes need more explanation of feasibility, cost, and implementation constraints.

The submission does not include the actual supporting documents needed for this part of the work.

References are provided, but they do not replace the supporting documents themselves.

Because the documents are missing, their relevance, depth, and range cannot be verified.