To what extent do some of the current major external partnerships progressions align with Burt’s Bees’ sustainability mission?HL
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Overall Score
14/25
Criteria A: Integration of a Key Concept
3/5
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3
5
Criteria Strands
A.1Understanding and integration of key concept
Excellent
A.2Connection to organization
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
- Clear framing of the investigation around sustainability with recurring reference to Burt’s Bees’ strategic pillars
- Use of sustainability terminology (circular economy, TBL, CSR) throughout analysis sections
- Underdeveloped dedicated definition section on sustainability
- Integration in methodology and bibliography sections remains superficial
Criteria B: Supporting Documents
1/4
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B.1Number of documents
Poor
B.2Relevance and depth
Good
Criteria Feedback
- Most sources are directly connected to the investigation and supply useful quantitative data
- Appendix lists more than five documents, exceeding IA requirements
- Limited use of academic or independent third-party studies
Criteria C: Selection and Application of Tools and Theories
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C.1Selection of tools and theories
Good
C.2Application and relevance
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Analysis and Evaluation
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D.1Data selection and use
Good
D.2Analysis quality
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria E: Conclusions
2/3
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E.1Consistency with evidence
Excellent
E.2Answer to research question
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria F: Structure
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F.1Organization and structure
Excellent
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Criteria G: Presentation
2/2
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G.1Required elements
Excellent
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