Should Tumur Trade launch an e-commerce platform to improve its business performance?HL
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Overall Score
19/25
Criteria A: Integration of a Key Concept
4/5
0
3
5
Criteria Strands
A.1Understanding and integration of key concept
Excellent
A.2Connection to organization
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
- Clearly identifies “change” as the key concept and links it to e-commerce adoption.
- Uses force-field analysis and Ansoff Matrix to frame drivers and restrainers of change.
- References organisational specifics (IT capability gaps, phased implementation) to ground conceptual discussion.
- Introduction does not explicitly integrate change theory terminology early.
- Cost–benefit analysis is largely financial with minimal conceptual commentary.
- Analysis quadrants describe factors but occasionally omit direct ties back to change theory.
Criteria B: Supporting Documents
3/4
0
2
4
Criteria Strands
B.1Number of documents
Good
B.2Relevance and depth
Good
Criteria Feedback
- Provides four supporting documents, meeting the 3–5 range requirement.
- Documents are directly relevant to Mongolian e-commerce and company operations.
- Key excerpts are highlighted to support analysis points.
- Depth of evidence is variable; some sources provide context rather than incisive data.
- Footnotes group multiple documents without specifying which supports each point.
- Quantitative data are limited in the secondary sources provided.
Criteria C: Selection and Application of Tools and Theories
3/4
0
2
4
Criteria Strands
C.1Selection of tools and theories
Good
C.2Application and relevance
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Analysis and Evaluation
3/5
0
3
5
Criteria Strands
D.1Data selection and use
Good
D.2Analysis quality
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria E: Conclusions
3/3
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2
3
Criteria Strands
E.1Consistency with evidence
Excellent
E.2Answer to research question
Excellent
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Criteria F: Structure
2/2
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1
2
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F.1Organization and structure
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria G: Presentation
1/2
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1
2
Criteria Strands
G.1Required elements
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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