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IB Business Management SL Internal Assessment Example
How has the launch of BMW i5 model improves BMW sustainability and profitability of the company?SL
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7
Official IB Result
IB Grade: 7
Criteria A: Integration of a Key Concept
4/5
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3
5
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Understanding and integration of key concept
Good
A.2Connection to organization
Good
Criteria Feedback
The student keeps sustainability as a clear lens throughout the investigation.
The student makes a sustained connection to BMW’s i5 launch, strategy, competition, and reported performance.
The student shows a solid understanding of how environmental, social, and economic considerations can interact in a business context.
The analysis sometimes stays at the level of assertion rather than fully testing the sustainability claims against evidence.
The student sometimes generalizes from BMW as a whole rather than isolating the i5’s specific contribution.
The trade-offs and tensions within sustainability are not examined as deeply as the benefits.
Criteria B: Supporting Documents
3/4
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2
4
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Number of documents
Good
B.2Relevance and depth
Good
Criteria Feedback
The student selects five supporting documents, which gives the investigation a relevant core evidence base.
The source set includes a direct BMW launch source and an external market perspective, which improves relevance and variety.
The student's documents are generally related to the research question and include launch details, sustainability features, competition, and financial context.
Several sources are BMW corporate or press materials, so the evidence base is somewhat narrow.
The financial evidence is company-wide rather than i5-specific, which limits how strongly it can support the student's claims about the launch’s impact.
The supporting-document list and bibliography are not presented with complete consistency.
Criteria C: Selection and Application of Tools and Theories
3/4
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2
4
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Selection of tools and theories
Good
C.2Application and relevance
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Analysis and Evaluation
4/5
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3
5
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Data selection and use
Good
D.2Analysis quality
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria E: Conclusions
2/3
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2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
E.1Consistency with evidence
Good
E.2Answer to research question
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria F: Structure
2/2
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1
2
Criteria StrandsPro
F.1Organization and structure
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria G: Presentation
1/2
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1
2
Criteria StrandsPro
G.1Required elements
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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