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IB Business Management SL Internal Assessment Example
¿De qué manera contribuye el elemento de la memoria de Clara a reforzar la sensación en el lector de circularidad en la obra en “La señora en su balcón”?SL
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7
Official IB Result
IB Grade: 7
Criteria A: Integration of a Key Concept
4/5
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3
5
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Understanding and integration of key concept
Excellent
A.2Connection to organization
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
The student keeps returning to the same key idea throughout the report, so the investigation stays conceptually focused.
The student connects the concept clearly to TSMC’s technological and market developments rather than treating it as an abstract label.
The student shows a strong sense of how change can be observed through process-node transitions, R&D effort, and shifts in market position.
The concept is sometimes stated more than it is developed in depth.
The student could distinguish more clearly between internal change within TSMC and change in the wider semiconductor market.
Some claims about the scale or timing of change need tighter support from the evidence.
Criteria B: Supporting Documents
3/4
0
2
4
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Number of documents
Excellent
B.2Relevance and depth
Good
Criteria Feedback
The student includes a solid set of supporting documents that are clearly relevant to the research question.
The student's use of TSMC annual reports gives the investigation strong primary evidence.
The student also brings in external material such as OECD and industry context, which helps move beyond company self-reporting.
One of the listed documents is not used in a meaningful way in the main discussion.
The range of evidence is relevant but not broad enough to test the argument as fully as it could be.
The reference list does not appear to capture the whole source base cleanly and consistently.
Criteria C: Selection and Application of Tools and Theories
3/4
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2
4
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Selection of tools and theories
Good
C.2Application and relevance
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Analysis and Evaluation
4/5
0
3
5
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Data selection and use
Good
D.2Analysis quality
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria E: Conclusions
2/3
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2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
E.1Consistency with evidence
Good
E.2Answer to research question
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria F: Structure
2/2
0
1
2
Criteria StrandsPro
F.1Organization and structure
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria G: Presentation
2/2
0
1
2
Criteria StrandsPro
G.1Required elements
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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