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IB Biology HL Internal Assessment Example
What is the effect of ascorbic acid concentration (0.00–0.20 M) on enzymatic browning in Malus domestica apple cubes, measured as absorbance at 420 nm after 24 hours?HL
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7
Official IB Result
IB Grade: 7
Criteria A: Research Design
6/6
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3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Research question context
Excellent
A.2Methodological considerations
Good
A.3Methodology description
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
The student's research question is focused, quantitative, and operationalised with a clear independent variable, dependent measure, biological material, and time frame.
The student situates the investigation in a specific biological context and shows strong understanding of the browning mechanism they are investigating.
The student's method has a clear overall sequence and enough structure that the investigation can largely be followed.
Some important design controls are not fully specified, especially treatment volume, sample mass or thickness, and how exposure was standardised.
The student does not verify final pH after adding ascorbic acid, which leaves a major confounding variable unresolved.
A few procedural details would still be needed for full reproducibility, including the exact dilution volumes and the measurement setup.
Criteria B: Data Analysis
6/6
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3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Communication of data recording and processing
Moderate
B.2Consideration of uncertainties
Moderate
B.3Data processing quality
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
The student's raw data are clearly organised with replication for each concentration and enough information to see the overall trend.
The student processes the data appropriately with means, standard deviations, and statistical testing, which shows a good attempt to move beyond simple observation.
The student includes uncertainty and variability in the analysis, showing awareness that the results are not exact.
The presentation of the processed data is not fully consistent, especially where the graph does not appear to match the reported spread of the results.
Some processing steps are not shown clearly enough for the reader to audit how the summary values were obtained.
The analysis sometimes overreaches by implying more about mechanism than the data themselves can demonstrate.
Criteria C: Conclusion
5/6
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3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Conclusion relevance and consistency
Good
C.2Scientific context comparison
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Evaluation
6/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Methodological weaknesses
Good
D.2Improvements
Good
Criteria Feedback
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