Biology IA Exemplar: To what extent does increasing sodium chloride… | RevisionDojo
Loading document preview...
IB Biology HL Internal Assessment Example
To what extent does increasing sodium chloride (NaCl) concentration (0.0, 0.3, 0.6, 0.9, and 1.2% w/v) affect the daily cumulative germination of Lepidium sativum seeds in 7 days, as measured by the count of radicle emergence?HL
Loading scores...
7
Official IB Result
IB Grade: 7
Criteria A: Research Design
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Research question context
Excellent
A.2Methodological considerations
Good
A.3Methodology description
Good
Criteria Feedback
The investigation is framed by a focused, quantitative research question with a clear organism, concentration range, response variable, and time frame.
The student places the topic in a relevant biological and agricultural context, showing why salinity and germination are scientifically important.
The procedure includes several reproducible features such as treatment levels, replicate number, seed number per dish, and an operational germination definition.
The method does not adequately explain how the NaCl concentration was kept constant across the seven days, because re-moistening with distilled water would dilute the treatments.
Some procedural details are missing or unclear, including the exact re-moistening volumes on all days and how temperature and dish position were controlled.
Although the investigation is specific, the methodological explanation stops short of fully justifying that the data collected were sufficient and reliable for answering the question.
Criteria B: Data Analysis
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Communication of data recording and processing
Excellent
B.2Consideration of uncertainties
Moderate
B.3Data processing quality
Good
Criteria Feedback
The data are presented in a clear and structured way, with raw counts, processed percentages, summary statistics, and graphs that allow the reader to follow the analysis.
The student includes a worked example and appropriate summary measures such as mean and standard deviation, which makes the processing transparent.
The analysis captures the main pattern well: cumulative germination declines as salinity increases, and the time-course graph helps show delayed onset as well as reduced final germination.
One cumulative dataset contains an impossible decrease, so part of the processed data is not reliable and this affects the credibility of the related means and standard deviations.
The uncertainty treatment is only partly appropriate, because some uncertainties are reported but the analysis does not address the major problem that the treatment concentration changes when distilled water is added.
The statistical treatment is not always rigorous, particularly where regression and significance are interpreted too strongly without the right caveats or follow-up tests.
Criteria C: Conclusion
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Conclusion relevance and consistency
Good
C.2Scientific context comparison
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit, sed do eiusmod tempor incididunt ut labore et dolore magna aliqua.
Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat.
Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur.
Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum.
Criteria D: Evaluation
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Methodological weaknesses
Good
D.2Improvements
Good
Criteria Feedback
Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit, sed do eiusmod tempor incididunt ut labore et dolore magna aliqua.
Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat.
Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur.
Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum.