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IB Biology SL Internal Assessment Example
“The effect of differences in temperature (-15°C, 7°C and 25°C) and environment on the pH of decaying strawberries.”SL
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7
Official IB Result
IB Grade: 7
Criteria A: Research Design
6/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Research question context
Good
A.2Methodological considerations
Moderate
A.3Methodology description
Poor
Criteria Feedback
The student sets up a focused investigation with clearly stated temperature conditions and a relevant biological context.
The student includes several sensible controls and methodological details that show awareness of how to make the comparison fair.
The student's procedure is structured well enough that another reader can broadly understand how the investigation was intended to work.
The research question and the measured variable are not fully aligned, because pH is used as a proxy for decay without being clearly justified.
Several important controls and implementation details are missing, such as how temperatures were monitored and how berries were selected for similar ripeness and size.
Some parts of the method are too vague for full replication, especially the repeated sampling and pH-paper use.
Criteria B: Data Analysis
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Communication of data recording and processing
Moderate
B.2Consideration of uncertainties
Moderate
B.3Data processing quality
Poor
Criteria Feedback
The student records and summarises the raw readings in a way that makes the overall data pattern understandable.
The student calculates means and standard deviations appropriately for repeated measurements.
The student's graphs and tables show that they are trying to present the processed data in a structured way.
Some figures and captions are not as precise as they could be, and a few labels or numbering choices reduce clarity.
The uncertainty treatment is only partial, because the stated measurement uncertainty is not consistently built into the analysis or graphing.
The processing does not fully match the research question, because it does not directly calculate or compare a decay-rate measure across the temperature groups.
Criteria C: Conclusion
6/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Conclusion relevance and consistency
Moderate
C.2Scientific context comparison
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Evaluation
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Methodological weaknesses
Moderate
D.2Improvements
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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