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IB Biology SL Internal Assessment Example
Research question: How does the concentration of pectinase (Aspergillus aculeatus) solutions
(0%, 20%, 40%, 60%, 80%) influence the volume (cm³) of Malus domestica juice collected after
5 minutes of filtration?SL
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7
Official IB Result
IB Grade: 7
Criteria A: Research Design
5/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Research question context
Excellent
A.2Methodological considerations
Good
A.3Methodology description
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
The student framed a focused research question in a clear biological and practical context.
The student's method includes sensible controls and repeat trials, which supports a fair investigation.
The student made a genuine effort to make the procedure reproducible with apparatus details, tables, and a preliminary trial.
Some important variables were not fully standardized or justified, such as the enzyme stock, apple source/ripeness, and the exact crushing/mixing procedure.
A few instructions are ambiguous or inconsistently referenced, which makes reproduction less secure.
The concentration range is not fully justified as sufficient to answer the question.
Criteria B: Data Analysis
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Communication of data recording and processing
Excellent
B.2Consideration of uncertainties
Moderate
B.3Data processing quality
Good
Criteria Feedback
The student's raw data and processed tables are clearly organized and easy to follow.
The student shows transparency in their calculations by including a worked example for the mean and standard deviation.
The student presents the data graphically with labelled axes, units, and error bars, which helps communicate the trend clearly.
There is a major uncertainty calculation error where the wrong apparatus uncertainty is used in the percentage-uncertainty example.
The analysis does not always distinguish carefully between correlation and causation.
The p-value is reported inaccurately as zero rather than below the software’s reporting precision.
Criteria C: Conclusion
3/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Conclusion relevance and consistency
Good
C.2Scientific context comparison
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Evaluation
3/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Methodological weaknesses
Good
D.2Improvements
Good
Criteria Feedback
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