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IB Biology HL Internal Assessment Example
How does the type of fabric (pure cotton, polyester, and silk) affect the evaporation rate of water when exposed to a constant temperature, as measured by grams lost per hour?HL
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7
Official IB Result
IB Grade: 7
Criteria A: Research Design
4/6
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3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Research question context
Excellent
A.2Methodological considerations
Good
A.3Methodology description
Good
Criteria Feedback
The student frames a focused, testable question and places it in a relevant scientific context by linking fabric behaviour to moisture management and fibre properties.
The student's method includes several purposeful controls and replicates, which shows awareness of fair comparison and comparative data collection.
The procedure is detailed enough that the investigation could be followed with some confidence, especially in the core measurement and timing sequence.
The stated constant-temperature context is not matched by the procedure, because the oven temperature drops substantially during the trial.
Some important variables are not controlled or explained in enough detail, including fabric source, weave, thickness, placement in the oven, and the exact saturation method.
The methodological rationale is more descriptive than explanatory, so several design choices are not fully justified in terms of how they improve validity and reliability.
Criteria B: Data Analysis
3/6
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3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Communication of data recording and processing
Excellent
B.2Consideration of uncertainties
Poor
B.3Data processing quality
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
The data are organised clearly into raw and processed tables, making the path from measurement to analysis easy to follow.
The student shows their calculations and uses mean values to compare the fabrics over time, which creates a clear basis for comparison.
The graph supports communication of the overall trend and makes the differences between materials easy to see.
The processing relies too heavily on a single average rate across the whole trial, even though the temperature changes substantially and the curves are not perfectly linear.
Uncertainty is only minimally addressed, with no spread measures, error bars, or quantitative treatment of replicate variation.
The comparison is weakened by the very unequal starting water masses and by a lack of normalization or statistical support for claims of difference.
Criteria C: Conclusion
3/6
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3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Conclusion relevance and consistency
Good
C.2Scientific context comparison
Poor
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Evaluation
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Methodological weaknesses
Good
D.2Improvements
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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