Biology IA Exemplar: How does increasing the concentration of sodium… | RevisionDojo
Loading document preview...
IB Biology SL Internal Assessment Example
How does increasing the concentration of sodium chloride (NaCl) solutions from 0.0% to 4.0% affect the mass change of Solanum tuberosum tissue after a 24-hour immersion period?SL
Loading scores...
7
Official IB Result
IB Grade: 7
Criteria A: Research Design
5/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Research question context
Excellent
A.2Methodological considerations
Good
A.3Methodology description
Good
Criteria Feedback
The student's research question is focused, quantitative, and clearly grounded in a relevant biological context.
The student justifies the choice of potato tissue and NaCl concentrations in a way that shows good experimental awareness.
The student's method is mostly reproducible because it includes key details such as replicates, immersion time, tissue dimensions, and solution preparation.
Some parts of the rationale are more descriptive than explanatory when it comes to whether the design is sufficiently robust.
The concentration spacing is fairly wide for pinpointing an isotonic point precisely.
A few procedural details remain ambiguous, especially around repeated solution preparation and handling of repeated measurements.
Criteria B: Data Analysis
5/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Communication of data recording and processing
Good
B.2Consideration of uncertainties
Moderate
B.3Data processing quality
Good
Criteria Feedback
The student's data are presented in a structured way with raw values, calculated changes, summary statistics, and graphing.
The student uses appropriate processing steps such as means, standard deviations, percentage change, and inferential statistics.
The student's worked example and statistical reporting make the analysis easier to follow and verify.
The student's sign convention and some table values are internally inconsistent, which weakens clarity and confidence in the processing.
The treatment of uncertainty is present, but it is not fully propagated through the mass-change calculations.
The graph and regression interpretation could be more careful, especially when estimating the isotonic point from broad concentration intervals.
Criteria C: Conclusion
5/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Conclusion relevance and consistency
Excellent
C.2Scientific context comparison
Good
Criteria Feedback
Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit, sed do eiusmod tempor incididunt ut labore et dolore magna aliqua.
Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat.
Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur.
Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum.
Criteria D: Evaluation
5/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Methodological weaknesses
Excellent
D.2Improvements
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit, sed do eiusmod tempor incididunt ut labore et dolore magna aliqua.
Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat.
Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur.
Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum.