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IB World Studies SL Extended Essay Exemplar: To what extent does TikTok's algorithm influence consumers’ behaviour
in Malaysia through the lens of cognitive biases?
To what extent does TikTok's algorithm influence consumers’ behaviour
in Malaysia through the lens of cognitive biases?
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Criteria A: Focus and Method
5/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
Excellent
Topic identification and communication
Good
Research question formulation
Moderate
Methodology selection and justification
Criteria Feedback
Clearly communicated and focused topic aligned with the World Studies theme
Explicit, appropriately scoped research question with defined platform, country, and constructs
Justified mixed-methods approach with reference to methodological literature
Research question bundles multiple variables, limiting depth
Methodological transparency is weakened by omission of sampling strategy details
Ethical considerations are noted but not integrated into design choices
Criteria B: Knowledge and Understanding
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
Good
Source material selection and relevance
Moderate
Knowledge demonstration and application
Good
Use of terminology and concepts
Criteria Feedback
Source material is generally relevant, drawing from academic journals, reports, and up-to-date examples
Terminology and concepts from both Digital Society and Psychology are mostly accurate and consistently applied
Integration of recent industry findings enriches the discussion
Reliance on non-peer-reviewed and tertiary sources limits academic rigor
Discussion remains largely descriptive with limited critical engagement with underlying mechanisms
Some definitions lack depth from primary cognitive psychology literature
Criteria C: Critical Thinking
7/12
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6
12
Criteria Strands
Moderate
Research quality and relevance
Moderate
Analysis and conclusions
Poor
Argument structure and evaluation
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Presentation
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4
Criteria Strands
Good
Academic structure
Excellent
Visual elements
Moderate
Referencing and formatting
Criteria Feedback
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Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur.
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