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IB World Studies SL Extended Essay Exemplar: To what extent can forest restoration efforts be leveraged to
improve soil quality in Eucalyptus-impacted areas of the Entoto mountain region
of Ethiopia?
To what extent can forest restoration efforts be leveraged to
improve soil quality in Eucalyptus-impacted areas of the Entoto mountain region
of Ethiopia?
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Criteria A: Focus and Method
5/6
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6
Criteria Strands
Excellent
Topic identification and communication
Excellent
Research question formulation
Good
Methodology selection and justification
Criteria Feedback
You communicate a clearly delimited, place-based investigation with a strong interdisciplinary purpose.
Your research question is focused and sustained throughout the report.
Your methodological choices are generally appropriate and show thoughtful source selection.
Some parts of the method would benefit from clearer procedural detail and greater transparency.
The exact basis for comparing different case studies could be explained more explicitly.
A small amount of additional operational precision would make the investigation even more focused.
Criteria B: Knowledge and Understanding
5/6
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3
6
Criteria Strands
Good
Source material selection and relevance
Excellent
Knowledge demonstration and application
Excellent
Use of terminology and concepts
Criteria Feedback
You use disciplinary concepts accurately and in a way that supports your argument rather than just defining terms.
Your source base is mostly relevant and appropriate to the topic and context.
You demonstrate integrated understanding across biology and environmental systems thinking.
A few sources are less rigorous than the strongest academic material in the report.
Some claims would be stronger if they were supported by more consistently triangulated evidence.
A little more caution in linking evidence to conclusions would improve the depth of interpretation.
Criteria C: Critical Thinking
10/12
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12
Criteria Strands
Good
Research quality and relevance
Good
Analysis and conclusions
Good
Argument structure and evaluation
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Presentation
4/4
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2
4
Criteria Strands
Excellent
Academic structure
Excellent
Visual elements
Moderate
Referencing and formatting
Criteria Feedback
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Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat.
Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur.
Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum.
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