Title: Gendered bias within sports design and how this
disadvantages female athletes.
Research question: Between boot design, physiological differences,
and poor training and pitch quality - which factor plays the most
detrimental role in the high ACL injury rates among female
footballers? (With reference to the Arsenal women’s team in the
2022-23 season)
Subjects: World Studies (DT and SEHS)
Theme: Equality and InequalitySL
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Overall Score
23/28
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Criteria A: Focus and Method
5/6
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3
6
Criteria Strands
A.1Topic identification and communication
Excellent
A.2Research question formulation
Excellent
A.3Methodology selection and justification
Good
Criteria Feedback
The research topic and global/local manifestations are articulated clearly and consistently throughout, maintaining strong focus.
The research question is sharply phrased around three bounded variables and remains explicit and well-anchored to the case study.
Methodology selection is informed and clearly linked to both SEHS and DT strands, demonstrating thoughtful source and method choice.
Repeated restatement of the full research question disrupts flow and could be streamlined.
