To what extent does fashion industry influenced the practices of wearing hijab among Muslim women in Malaysia? Does it align with Islamic teachings and guidelines?SL
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Official IB Result
IB Grade: C
Criteria A: Focus and Method
6/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Topic communication and explanation
Moderate
A.2Research question clarity and focus
Poor
A.3Research methodology
Poor
Criteria Feedback
- The student communicates a recognisable and relevant topic that stays connected to Malaysian Muslim women and hijab practice.
- The student includes a quantitative survey and explains the Likert-scale approach clearly.
- The student shows some awareness of bias and limitations in the way the data was collected.
- The inquiry is too broad because it combines two different questions that are not sharply separated.
- Key terms are not defined with enough precision for the reader to see exactly what is being tested.
- The method is described only generally, so the sampling and validity of the survey are difficult to judge.
Criteria B: Knowledge and Understanding
3/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Subject knowledge
Moderate
B.2Use of sources
Moderate
B.3Subject-specific terminology and concepts
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
- The student shows relevant knowledge of hijab, Islamic teachings, and Malaysian context.
- The student uses a range of subject vocabulary, including several key Islamic terms.
- The student makes a good effort to ground the discussion in religious sources and recognises that interpretation is not uniform.
- Some important terms are used imprecisely or inconsistently, which weakens conceptual clarity.
- Several claims move beyond what the evidence clearly supports and become too definite.
- Source use is relevant overall, but it is not always applied with enough evaluation or consistency.
Criteria C: Critical Thinking
5/12
0
6
12
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Research analysis
Poor
C.2Discussion and evaluation
Poor
C.3Critical argumentation
Poor
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Presentation
1/4
0
2
4
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Structure
Moderate
D.2Layout
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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