To what extent are young adult Muslim women in Malaysia aware of the concept of Tabarruj when using coloured contact lenses?SL
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Official IB Result
IB Grade: A
Criteria A: Focus and Method
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Topic communication and explanation
Good
A.2Research question clarity and focus
Good
A.3Research methodology
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
- The student communicates a clear and specific topic with a real-world and religious context.
- The student identifies a research question that is focused enough to support a small-scale investigation.
- The student includes a range of relevant methods and sources, including survey, interview, and secondary material.
- The scope shifts between awareness, permissibility, and behaviour, which weakens focus.
- The student's sampling approach limits how confidently the findings can be generalized.
- The survey design risks leading responses because the ruling is shown before the knowledge questions.
Criteria B: Knowledge and Understanding
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Subject knowledge
Moderate
B.2Use of sources
Moderate
B.3Subject-specific terminology and concepts
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
- The student shows good understanding of the main Islamic concepts relevant to the topic.
- The student uses several subject-specific terms with a generally clear purpose.
- The student includes relevant sources such as Qur’anic material, a fatwa, and an expert interview.
- Some terms are defined too narrowly or imprecisely.
- Several ideas are handled in a way that would benefit from more scholarly nuance.
- Some sources are used in a way that supports one conclusion more than they are compared critically.
Criteria C: Critical Thinking
12/12
0
6
12
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Research analysis
Poor
C.2Discussion and evaluation
Poor
C.3Critical argumentation
Poor
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Presentation
4/4
0
2
4
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Structure
Good
D.2Layout
Good
Criteria Feedback
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