De qué manera “La Casa de Los Espíritus” utiliza el realismo mágico como un medio para descifrar los acontecimientos socio políticos en Chile durante el siglo XX?SL
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Official IB Result
IB Grade: B
Criteria A: Focus and Method
5/6
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3
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Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Topic communication and appropriateness
Excellent
A.2Research question clarity and focus
Excellent
A.3Methodology completeness
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
- The title and introduction clearly communicate the research focus on magical realism and its socio-political context.
- The research question is precisely stated as a ‘¿De qué manera…?’ inquiry and is tightly linked to the essay’s analysis.
- Topic is communicated accurately and effectively, demonstrating a clear and appropriate purpose and focus.
- No dedicated methodology section explaining how sources were selected and evaluated, limiting transparency.
- Over-reliance on popular web sources rather than academic or peer-reviewed materials reduces methodological rigor.
- The table of contents omits any methodology discussion, which would clarify research steps and criteria.
Criteria B: Knowledge and Understanding
4/6
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3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Application of source material
Moderate
B.2Subject knowledge
Moderate
B.3Use of terminology and concepts
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
- Relevant quotations from the novel are well integrated and support the investigation’s argument.
- The student shows clear subject knowledge of magical-realist conventions and key Chilean historical events.
- Core terminology (e.g., realismo mágico, dictadura) is used accurately and consistently overall.
- Dependence on general biography websites weakens the academic depth of the context provided.
- Some historical details are simplified and lack deeper analytical framing within the argument.
- Occasional language slips and spelling errors reduce the precision of terminology.
Criteria C: Critical Thinking
5/12
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6
12
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Research quality
Poor
C.2Analysis depth
Poor
C.3Discussion and evaluation
Poor
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Presentation
4/4
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2
4
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Structure appropriateness
Good
D.2Layout considerations
Good
Criteria Feedback
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