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IB Spanish ab initio SL Extended Essay Example

¿Cómo Mónica Ojeda utiliza la alegoría para comunicar temas de violencia vistos en el mundo real en el cuentario Las Voladoras?

Overall Score

23/28

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Criteria A: Focus and Method

5/6

Criteria Strands

Excellent

Topic communication and appropriateness

Excellent

Research question clarity and focus

Good

Methodology completeness

Criteria Feedback

Title and introduction communicate the focus on allegory and violence with precision and appropriateness
Research question is clearly stated, focused on a single literary device, and consistently linked to analysis
Theoretical framework defines key terms (gótico latinoamericano, alegoría) providing a solid analytical foundation

Introduction contains some redundancy and relies on plot summary before foregrounding the research question
Methodology lacks breadth in secondary scholarship, relying heavily on non‐peer‐reviewed sources
Citation style is occasionally irregular, indicating only partially informed selection of sources

Criteria B: Knowledge and Understanding

4/6

Criteria Strands

Good

Application of source material

Good

Subject knowledge

Moderate

Use of terminology and concepts

Criteria Feedback

Frequent, pertinent quotations from primary texts are well integrated into the argument about allegory
Subject knowledge of Ojeda’s work, genre context, and literary conventions is clear and coherent
Discussion of tone and claustrophobia demonstrates perceptive linking of diction to atmosphere

Occasional quotations lack in‐depth analysis and some passages rely too heavily on plot summary
Terminology use is mostly accurate but sometimes imprecise (e.g., ‘coágulo’ equated simplistically with trauma)
Dependence on dictionary and non‐academic sources limits demonstration of scholarly engagement

Criteria C: Critical Thinking

10/12

Criteria Strands

Moderate

Research quality

Moderate

Analysis depth

Poor

Discussion and evaluation

Criteria Feedback

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Criteria D: Presentation

4/4

Criteria Strands

Excellent

Structure appropriateness

Good

Layout considerations

Criteria Feedback

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IB Spanish ab initio SL Extended Essay Example

¿Cómo Mónica Ojeda utiliza la alegoría para comunicar temas de violencia vistos en el mundo real en el cuentario Las Voladoras?

Overall Score

23/28

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Criteria A: Focus and Method

5/6

Criteria Strands

Excellent

Topic communication and appropriateness

Excellent

Research question clarity and focus

Good

Methodology completeness

Criteria Feedback

Title and introduction communicate the focus on allegory and violence with precision and appropriateness
Research question is clearly stated, focused on a single literary device, and consistently linked to analysis
Theoretical framework defines key terms (gótico latinoamericano, alegoría) providing a solid analytical foundation

Introduction contains some redundancy and relies on plot summary before foregrounding the research question
Methodology lacks breadth in secondary scholarship, relying heavily on non‐peer‐reviewed sources
Citation style is occasionally irregular, indicating only partially informed selection of sources

Criteria B: Knowledge and Understanding

4/6

Criteria Strands

Good

Application of source material

Good

Subject knowledge

Moderate

Use of terminology and concepts

Criteria Feedback

Frequent, pertinent quotations from primary texts are well integrated into the argument about allegory
Subject knowledge of Ojeda’s work, genre context, and literary conventions is clear and coherent
Discussion of tone and claustrophobia demonstrates perceptive linking of diction to atmosphere

Occasional quotations lack in‐depth analysis and some passages rely too heavily on plot summary
Terminology use is mostly accurate but sometimes imprecise (e.g., ‘coágulo’ equated simplistically with trauma)
Dependence on dictionary and non‐academic sources limits demonstration of scholarly engagement

Criteria C: Critical Thinking

10/12

Criteria Strands

Moderate

Research quality

Moderate

Analysis depth

Poor

Discussion and evaluation

Criteria Feedback

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Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat.

Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur.
Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum.

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Criteria D: Presentation

4/4

Criteria Strands

Excellent

Structure appropriateness

Good

Layout considerations

Criteria Feedback

Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit, sed do eiusmod tempor incididunt ut labore et dolore magna aliqua.
Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat.

Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur.
Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum.

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