To what extent does the consumption of melancholic music influence the mood regulation of young adults with tendencies of depression?SL
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B
Official IB Result
IB Grade: B
Criteria A: Focus and Method
5/6
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3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Topic communication and explanation
Excellent
A.2Research question formulation and focus
Good
A.3Research methodology
Good
Criteria Feedback
- The student communicates the topic clearly and makes the psychological context immediately understandable.
- The student's research question is explicit and stays connected to the main line of discussion.
- The student uses a generally coherent review-based method with a relevant mix of studies and theory.
- The method would be stronger if the student explained how sources were selected and why they were included.
- Some key terms, especially the population and outcome variables, need tighter operational definition.
- The scope of the question is still a little broad, which makes the investigation harder to test precisely.
Criteria B: Knowledge and Understanding
5/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Subject knowledge and source application
Good
B.2Use of terminology and concepts
Good
Criteria Feedback
- The student shows solid understanding of the psychology of mood, rumination, and music-based emotion regulation.
- The student applies subject-specific terminology accurately in most places.
- The student uses theory meaningfully to interpret the studies rather than listing concepts in isolation.
- Some terms are used a little loosely and would benefit from more consistent definition.
- A few source applications would be stronger if the academic weight of the evidence were clearer.
- There are occasional conceptual imprecisions when distinguishing correlational and experimental evidence.
Criteria C: Critical Thinking
9/12
0
6
12
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Research quality and relevance
Moderate
C.2Analysis depth and effectiveness
Moderate
C.3Discussion and evaluation
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Presentation
3/4
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2
4
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Structure appropriateness
Good
D.2Layout and formatting
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria E: Engagement (Reflection)
Criteria StrandsPro
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