To what extent do environmental factors contribute to the development of schizophrenia?SL
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B
Official IB Result
IB Grade: B
Criteria A: Focus and Method
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Topic communication and explanation
Good
A.2Research question formulation and focus
Moderate
A.3Research methodology
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
- You communicate the topic of schizophrenia and environmental influence clearly from the start.
- Your research question is explicit and stays connected to the discussion throughout.
- You use a workable research approach with relevant secondary sources and a suitable conceptual framework.
- Your topic scope is still quite broad, so the investigation sometimes lacks precision.
- The source plan and the sources actually used are not fully aligned.
- You would strengthen the method by explaining why these sources were chosen and how they were selected.
Criteria B: Knowledge and Understanding
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Subject knowledge and source application
Moderate
B.2Use of terminology and concepts
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
- You show good understanding of schizophrenia as a multifactorial disorder.
- You use a wide range of subject-specific terminology correctly in most places.
- You connect genetic and environmental ideas in a way that supports the investigation.
- You sometimes treat heritability and concordance too directly as causal proof.
- Some concepts, such as stress-response mechanisms, could be explained more precisely.
- A few claims become stronger than the evidence allows, especially when moving from association to causation.
Criteria C: Critical Thinking
8/12
0
6
12
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Research quality and relevance
Moderate
C.2Analysis depth and effectiveness
Moderate
C.3Discussion and evaluation
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Presentation
4/4
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2
4
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Structure appropriateness
Excellent
D.2Layout and formatting
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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