To what extent does Byung-Chul Han’s Critique of Neoliberalism in the Burnout Society offer a new perspective on the importance of liberty in modern capitalist societies?HL
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Official IB Result
IB Grade: B
Criteria A: Focus and Method
4/6
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3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Topic communication and explanation
Moderate
A.2Research question formulation and focus
Moderate
A.3Research methodology
Poor
Criteria Feedback
- Your investigation has a clear philosophical direction and a relevant comparison between Han and Mill.
- You keep the discussion focused on a recognizable central idea throughout most of the essay.
- You identify primary texts and attempt to explain how they support the line of inquiry.
- Your question is still broader than it needs to be for a tightly controlled investigation.
- Some key terms need sharper definition so the reader can see exactly what is being tested.
- Your method would be stronger if you explained more clearly how you are comparing and evaluating the texts.
Criteria B: Knowledge and Understanding
3/6
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3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Application of source material
Moderate
B.2Subject knowledge and understanding
Moderate
B.3Use of terminology and concepts
Poor
Criteria Feedback
- You show a clear basic understanding of the main ideas in both Mill and Han.
- You use several relevant philosophical terms correctly enough to support the discussion.
- You apply quoted material from the texts in ways that usually connect to the argument you are making.
- Some important concepts are blended together when they should be kept distinct.
- Your explanation of the texts is sometimes general rather than closely grounded in the wording and reasoning of the source material.
- A few claims are presented with more confidence than the evidence in the essay fully supports.
Criteria C: Critical Thinking
11/12
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6
12
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Research quality and relevance
Poor
C.2Analysis and conclusions
Poor
C.3Discussion and evaluation
Poor
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Presentation
3/4
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2
4
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Structure appropriateness
Good
D.2Layout considerations
Good
Criteria Feedback
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