Dans quelle mesure les actions des Nations Unies au sujet de la Corée du Nord remet-elle en question sa légitimité en tant qu’organisation intergouvernementale sur la scène internationale?SL
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Official IB Result
IB Grade: A
Criteria A: Framework for the Essay
5/6
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3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Research question
Excellent
A.2Research methods
Good
A.3Structure
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
- The research question is clearly framed, relevant, and suitably bounded around the UN, North Korea, and legitimacy.
- The essay’s organization supports the reader well, with a logical progression through introduction, thematic sections, and conclusion.
- The investigation uses a recognisable and appropriate mix of source types and theoretical lenses.
- The overall line of enquiry stays focused on the legitimacy question rather than drifting into pure description.
- The scope would be even stronger if the time frame and dimensions of legitimacy were defined more explicitly at the outset.
- The source strategy is only partially explained, so the essay does not fully show how evidence was selected, compared, and weighed.
- Some claims rely on broad methodological assumptions rather than a clearly articulated research process.
- A few source and legal references are imprecise, which weakens the methodological control of the essay.
Criteria B: Knowledge and Understanding
4/6
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3
6
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B.1Knowledge
Good
B.2Understanding (Terminology)
Good
B.3Understanding (Concepts)
Good
Criteria Feedback
- Relevant subject terminology is used consistently, including legitimacy, sovereignty, sanctions, veto, realism, liberalism, and neo-colonialism.
- The essay shows good awareness of core concepts and attempts to explain them rather than simply naming them.
- A range of relevant research materials is used to build knowledge of the UN and North Korea case.
- The use of theoretical concepts helps the reader understand the interpretive framework of the essay.
- Some terminology is not used with enough precision, especially around the UN Charter, Security Council authority, and R2P.
- Several concepts are applied in a simplified way, so the understanding shown is sometimes partial rather than fully developed.
- The evidence base is relevant but not comprehensive enough to establish top-band knowledge.
- A few factual and institutional references are inaccurate or insufficiently controlled, which weakens the reliability of the subject knowledge.
Criteria C: Analysis and Line of Argument
4/6
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3
6
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C.1Analysis
Good
C.2Line of argument
Good
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Criteria D: Discussion and Evaluation
4/8
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4
8
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D.1Discussion
Moderate
D.2Evaluation
Moderate
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Criteria F: Formatting
Criteria StrandsPro
F.1The student provides a word count at the beginning of the document
F.2The title of the essay is stated at the start
F.3The work does not surpass the maximum word limit of 4000 words
F.4The pages are numbered
Criteria Feedback
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