Dans quelle mesure la consolidation politique de l’Empire d’Oyo à partir du XVe siècle a-t-elle structuré les dynamiques migratoires dans l’espace yoruba jusqu’à la fin du XVIIIe siècle ?SL
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B
Official IB Result
IB Grade: B
Criteria A: Focus and Method
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Topic communication and appropriateness
Good
A.2Research question clarity and focus
Moderate
A.3Methodology completeness and appropriateness
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
- The student presents a recognizably historical and appropriate topic with an arguable focus on the relationship between political change and migration.
- The student's research question is clear enough to guide the investigation and shows an attempt to frame causation rather than simple description.
- The student shows some awareness of source limitations and a sensible intention to compare oral tradition with modern scholarship.
- The topic is too broad chronologically, and the essay repeatedly moves beyond the time frame stated in the question.
- The method is only partly developed, with a narrow source base and limited explanation of how sources are being used to prove the claim.
- The investigation would be stronger if the student narrowed the types of migration being studied and made the scope more precise.
Criteria B: Knowledge and Understanding
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Application of source material
Moderate
B.2Subject knowledge and understanding
Good
B.3Use of terminology and concepts
Good
Criteria Feedback
- The student demonstrates good knowledge of major Oyo political institutions and how they related to authority and mobility.
- The student uses a range of relevant historical terminology accurately and generally in support of their explanation.
- The student connects several political and military developments to migration in a way that shows understanding beyond simple narrative.
- Some claims are too general or too confidently stated for the evidence provided.
- Several arguments would benefit from more precise support about particular groups, routes, or forms of movement.
- A few terms and concepts are used broadly without enough definition or distinction.
Criteria C: Critical Thinking
8/12
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6
12
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Research quality
Poor
C.2Analysis depth
Poor
C.3Discussion and evaluation
Poor
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Presentation
3/4
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2
4
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Structure appropriateness
Good
D.2Layout and formatting
Good
Criteria Feedback
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