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IB History SL Extended Essay Exemplar: Catherine the Great’s Policies towards minority religions in 18th century Russia as they pertain to Enlightenment principles of religious tolerance: To what extent did Catherine the Great’s policies towards minority religions in 18th century Russia reflect Enlightenment principles of religious tolerance?
Catherine the Great’s Policies towards minority religions in 18th century Russia as they pertain to Enlightenment principles of religious tolerance: To what extent did Catherine the Great’s policies towards minority religions in 18th century Russia reflect Enlightenment principles of religious tolerance?
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Criteria A: Focus and Method
6/6
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Excellent
Topic communication and appropriateness
Excellent
Research question clarity and focus
Good
Methodology completeness and appropriateness
Criteria Feedback
You communicate a clear and focused historical topic from the start.
Your research question is evaluative and stays closely tied to the investigation.
Your selection of sources is appropriate for the topic and shows informed research planning.
A fuller explanation of your source-selection process would make the method even stronger.
You could be more explicit about how you judged the reliability and limits of different source types.
Criteria B: Knowledge and Understanding
6/6
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3
6
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Excellent
Application of source material
Excellent
Subject knowledge and understanding
Excellent
Use of terminology and concepts
Criteria Feedback
You use source material that is highly relevant to the question.
You show secure knowledge of Catherine’s reign and the minority religions you study.
Your use of historical terminology and concepts is accurate and consistent.
Some broader contextual claims would benefit from tighter qualification.
A few points could be grounded in slightly more concrete evidence.
Criteria C: Critical Thinking
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Good
Research quality
Good
Analysis depth
Good
Discussion and evaluation
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Criteria D: Presentation
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Excellent
Structure appropriateness
Excellent
Layout and formatting
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