To what extent has air pollution in Katowice in 2015-2023 decreased due to the implementation of mitigation strategies, and how can it be compared to my hometown Wałbrzych?SL
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C
Official IB Result
IB Grade: C
Criteria A: Focus and Method
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Topic communication and clarity
Moderate
A.2Research question formulation
Moderate
A.3Research methodology
Poor
Criteria Feedback
- The student communicates a recognizable geographic investigation with a clear local context and comparative purpose.
- The student's title and research question are specific enough to show the intended direction of the study.
- The student uses a range of relevant sources and visual material to support the enquiry.
- The student's methodology is not explained, so the reader cannot see how the data were selected or compared.
- The research question is still too broad to support a tightly focused investigation.
- Some background material drifts away from the air-pollution focus and weakens the precision of the enquiry.
Criteria B: Knowledge and Understanding
3/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Subject knowledge
Moderate
B.2Use of terminology and concepts
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
- The student shows sound knowledge of key air-pollution terms and concepts such as PM10, PM2.5, NO2, SO2, emissions, and mitigation.
- The student connects data to explanation instead of only listing figures.
- The student demonstrates some understanding of how different sources, such as transport and heating, affect pollution patterns.
- Several key claims are not consistently supported by in-text references.
- Scientific notation and units are not always used consistently.
- Some concepts are applied unevenly, especially when different pollutants are combined into one total figure.
Criteria C: Critical Thinking
5/12
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6
12
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Research application
Poor
C.2Analysis and evaluation
Poor
C.3Discussion and argument
Poor
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Presentation
2/4
0
2
4
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Structure
Good
D.2Layout
Good
Criteria Feedback
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