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IB Film SL Extended Essay Exemplar: What role does editing play in the portrayal of psychological horror in Last Night in Soho and Black Swan, and how do these techniques enhance the audience’s emotional response?
What role does editing play in the portrayal of psychological horror in Last Night in Soho and Black Swan, and how do these techniques enhance the audience’s emotional response?
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Overall Score
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Criteria A: Focus and Method
6/6
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3
6
Criteria Strands
Excellent
Topic communication and appropriateness
Excellent
Research question clarity and focus
Excellent
Methodology completeness and effectiveness
Criteria Feedback
Topic is communicated accurately and effectively with a clear and focused purpose throughout the investigation.
Research question is explicitly stated, well framed, and consistently linked to the analysis.
Methodology demonstrates an appropriate and varied range of relevant sources and methods with clear evidence of informed selection.
Minor digressions into broader genre history occasionally dilute the razor-sharp focus on editing techniques.
The coding process in the qualitative content analysis lacks detailed description of categories and reliability measures.
Criteria B: Knowledge and Understanding
6/6
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3
6
Criteria Strands
Good
Subject knowledge and source application
Excellent
Use of terminology and concepts
Criteria Feedback
Demonstrates excellent subject knowledge with accurate and consistent use of key terminology (e.g., ‘fragmented cutting’, ‘match cut’, ‘diegetic pacing’).
Effectively applies theory—formalist and psychoanalytic—to primary film examples, showing deep understanding.
Source material from primary texts and interviews is woven seamlessly into the argument to support technical discussion.
Overreliance on some popular web sources (blogs, Prezi) slightly undermines scholarly depth.
Certain technical terms (e.g. “mirror gags”) are introduced without precise definition or peer-reviewed citation.
Criteria C: Critical Thinking
12/12
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6
12
Criteria Strands
Moderate
Research quality and relevance
Good
Analysis depth and effectiveness
Moderate
Discussion and evaluation
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Presentation
4/4
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2
4
Criteria Strands
Excellent
Structure appropriateness
Good
Layout and formatting
Criteria Feedback
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Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat.
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Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum.
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