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IB Film SL Extended Essay Exemplar: To what extent does director Bong Joon-Ho represent family and class in ‘The Host’ and ‘Snowpiercer’ using visual symbolism and settings? ”
To what extent does director Bong Joon-Ho represent family and class in ‘The Host’ and ‘Snowpiercer’ using visual symbolism and settings? ”
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Overall Score
12/28
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Criteria A: Focus and Method
3/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
Moderate
Topic communication and appropriateness
Moderate
Research question clarity and focus
Moderate
Methodology completeness and effectiveness
Criteria Feedback
Topic and purpose are clearly communicated in the title and introduction
Research question is explicitly stated and linked to film form and themes
Methodology employs appropriate textual analysis and secondary criticism sources
Scope is overly broad, with digressions to films outside the research question
Methodology lacks justification of source selection and systematic analytical procedure
Citation style is uneven and in-text integration of sources is weak
Criteria B: Knowledge and Understanding
3/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
Moderate
Subject knowledge and source application
Moderate
Use of terminology and concepts
Criteria Feedback
Generally accurate use of film terminology (e.g., low-angle, bird’s-eye view)
Sound awareness of mise-en-scène, camera angles, lighting, and symbolic spaces
Effective application of technical analysis in key scenes (lighting contrasts, train hierarchy)
Analysis is often descriptive rather than critical, with limited interrogation of sources
Content occasionally drifts to unrelated films, undermining subject coherence
Precision of terminology falters at times and definitions lack scholarly grounding
Criteria C: Critical Thinking
4/12
0
6
12
Criteria Strands
Poor
Research quality and relevance
Poor
Analysis depth and effectiveness
Poor
Discussion and evaluation
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Presentation
2/4
0
2
4
Criteria Strands
Moderate
Structure appropriateness
Moderate
Layout and formatting
Criteria Feedback
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Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat.
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Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum.
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