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IB Film SL Extended Essay Exemplar: To what extent do Euphoria and Mean Girls compare and contrast in costume design to convey the feminist film theory?
To what extent do Euphoria and Mean Girls compare and contrast in costume design to convey the feminist film theory?
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Overall Score
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Criteria A: Focus and Method
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
Excellent
Topic communication and appropriateness
Good
Research question clarity and focus
Good
Methodology completeness and effectiveness
Criteria Feedback
You communicate a clear, purposeful investigation with a focused comparative lens.
You keep the topic anchored in costume as evidence, which supports a systematic approach.
Your research question gives the reader a definite direction and is revisited throughout.
The method would be stronger if you explained why these specific scenes and stills were selected.
Some source choices are less authoritative than they should be for this kind of investigation.
Key terms in the research question could be narrowed further to make the focus more precise.
Criteria B: Knowledge and Understanding
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
Good
Subject knowledge and source application
Good
Use of terminology and concepts
Criteria Feedback
You show clear understanding of feminist film theory and apply it to costume in a meaningful way.
Your terminology is generally accurate and consistent across the essay.
You use examples from the texts to support your ideas rather than relying only on general statements.
Some source application is uneven and occasionally too broad or assumptive.
A few claims move beyond the evidence available in the scenes or sources.
Some concepts would benefit from being defined more precisely rather than treated as a single broad framework.
Criteria C: Critical Thinking
6/12
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6
12
Criteria Strands
Good
Research quality and relevance
Moderate
Analysis depth and effectiveness
Moderate
Discussion and evaluation
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Presentation
2/4
0
2
4
Criteria Strands
Excellent
Structure appropriateness
Excellent
Layout and formatting
Criteria Feedback
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Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat.
Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur.
Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum.
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