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IB Film SL Extended Essay Example
How does Roger Deakins’ use of lighting, colour and composition adapt visual conventions in No Country for Old Men (2007) and Blade Runner 2049 (2017)?SL
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Overall Score
27/28
Criteria A: Focus and Method
6/6
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3
6
Criteria Strands
A.1Topic communication and appropriateness
Excellent
A.2Research question clarity and focus
Excellent
A.3Methodology completeness and effectiveness
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
You communicate your topic clearly and purposefully, with a well-chosen comparison that keeps the investigation focused and manageable.
Your research question is precise and consistently addressed throughout the essay.
You select and justify a coherent method that combines close visual analysis with relevant scholarship and practitioner material.
You show strong awareness of the limits of still-frame analysis, which strengthens your control over the evidence.
A slightly fuller explanation of why particular frames or adjacent shots were selected would make the method even more transparent.
You could strengthen the methodological discussion further by showing more explicitly how representative your chosen stills are of the wider sequences.
Criteria B: Knowledge and Understanding
6/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
B.1Subject knowledge and source application
Excellent
B.2Use of terminology and concepts
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
You show strong subject knowledge and use film terminology accurately and analytically.
Your source application is effective overall, especially when you connect Deakins’ practice to genre ideas and visual form.
You demonstrate a clear understanding of how cinematographic choices shape meaning, emotion, and genre expectation.
Your terminology is consistent and supports the analysis rather than sitting separately from it.
Some broader claims about genre convention would benefit from slightly more nuance and more explicit engagement with competing interpretations.
A few points would be stronger if you linked them back more directly to the scholarship you cite.
Criteria C: Critical Thinking
12/12
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6
12
Criteria Strands
C.1Research quality and relevance
Good
C.2Analysis depth and effectiveness
Good
C.3Discussion and evaluation
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Presentation
3/4
0
2
4
Criteria Strands
D.1Structure appropriateness
Good
D.2Layout and formatting
Good
Criteria Feedback
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