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IB Film SL Extended Essay Exemplar: How does Bong Joon-Ho use cinematic techniques to portray the
inequality between social classes in the movies Parasite and Snowpiercer?
How does Bong Joon-Ho use cinematic techniques to portray the
inequality between social classes in the movies Parasite and Snowpiercer?
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Overall Score
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Criteria A: Focus and Method
5/6
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3
6
Criteria Strands
Excellent
Topic communication and appropriateness
Excellent
Research question clarity and focus
Good
Methodology completeness and effectiveness
Criteria Feedback
The research question and topic are communicated clearly and maintained throughout the essay.
Appropriate range of primary and secondary sources with evidence of informed selection.
Consistent use of thematic headers and signposting maintains reader focus.
No explicit methodological framework or criteria for scene selection is articulated.
Reliability and limitations of sources are not evaluated.
Occasional digressions into plot summary dilute the sustained focus.
Criteria B: Knowledge and Understanding
5/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
Good
Subject knowledge and source application
Excellent
Use of terminology and concepts
Criteria Feedback
Consistent and accurate use of specialized film studies terminology (e.g., chiaroscuro lighting, deep depth of field).
Solid integration of primary film evidence with secondary scholarly commentary.
Clear understanding of cinematic techniques and conceptual links to class inequality.
Some theoretical references remain descriptive rather than critically interrogated.
Occasional imprecision in term usage (e.g., ‘reaction shot’ for a static frame).
Source citations vary in academic rigour, indicating uneven depth of engagement.
Criteria C: Critical Thinking
11/12
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6
12
Criteria Strands
Moderate
Research quality and relevance
Moderate
Analysis depth and effectiveness
Moderate
Discussion and evaluation
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Presentation
4/4
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2
4
Criteria Strands
Excellent
Structure appropriateness
Moderate
Layout and formatting
Criteria Feedback
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Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat.
Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur.
Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum.
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