How do the contemporary Indonesian coming-of-age films,"Nanti Kita Cerita Tentang Hari Ini"(2020) and "Keluarga Cemara (2018), represent family struggles in the context of Indonesian society through their distinct visual styles?"SL
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B
Overall Score
20/28
Criteria A: Focus and Method
5/6
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3
6
Criteria Strands
A.1Topic communication and appropriateness
Excellent
A.2Research question clarity and focus
Good
A.3Methodology completeness and effectiveness
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
- Topic is communicated accurately and effectively, with a clear and appropriate focus on visual style and family struggle.
- The research question is clearly stated, well‐focused, and effectively connected to the structure of the essay.
- The methodology draws on an appropriate range of relevant primary film analysis and secondary sources, with evidence of informed selection.
- Scope is somewhat over‐broad, combining two films and multiple visual parameters, which occasionally dilutes analytical depth.
- Methodological rationale is not fully articulated and lacks sustained engagement with formal film‐studies theory.
- Sections of historical context sometimes detract from the core analytical focus.
Criteria B: Knowledge and Understanding
4/6
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3
6
Criteria Strands
B.1Subject knowledge and source application
Good
B.2Use of terminology and concepts
Good
Criteria Feedback
- Demonstrates clear subject knowledge of Indonesian cinema history and filmic concepts.
- Applies terminology such as mise-en-scène, framing, and motivated lighting accurately and consistently to support analysis.
- Links technical visual elements to thematic interpretations in the two films.
- Reliance on journalistic and web‐based sources limits academic depth.
- Some sections drift into descriptive background rather than analytical application to the research question.
- Advanced theoretical concepts (e.g., semiotics, spectatorship) are under-utilized.
Criteria C: Critical Thinking
8/12
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6
12
Criteria Strands
C.1Research quality and relevance
Moderate
C.2Analysis depth and effectiveness
Moderate
C.3Discussion and evaluation
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Presentation
3/4
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2
4
Criteria Strands
D.1Structure appropriateness
Excellent
D.2Layout and formatting
Good
Criteria Feedback
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