“How is the limitation of law enforcement and social constructions on women's pursuit of self-sufficiency depicted in the 19th-century English society through Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen?”SL
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Official IB Result
IB Grade: A
Criteria A: Focus and Method
5/6
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3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Topic communication and appropriateness
Excellent
A.2Research question clarity and focus
Excellent
A.3Methodology completeness
Good
Criteria Feedback
- Clear, sustained focus on legal and social constraints on women’s self-sufficiency
- Explicit, well-linked research question restated across abstract, introduction, and headings
- Logical organization into labeled subsections with primary and secondary sources
- Methodology lacks explicit criteria for source selection and justification
- Minor verbosity and occasional digressions into general Regency background
- Insufficient explanation of why certain non-scholarly sources were chosen
Criteria B: Knowledge and Understanding
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Application of source material
Moderate
B.2Subject knowledge
Good
B.3Use of terminology and concepts
Good
Criteria Feedback
- Clear and coherent subject knowledge of Regency social hierarchy, entailment, and coverture
- Appropriate use of key literary and socio-historical terminology
- Effective integration of primary quotations to support context
- Overreliance on SparkNotes and popular websites limits depth of application
- Occasional factual inaccuracies (e.g., incorrect publication dates and periodization)
- Use of dictionary definitions for legal concepts adds little analytical value
Criteria C: Critical Thinking
11/12
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6
12
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Research quality
Moderate
C.2Analysis depth
Poor
C.3Discussion and evaluation
Poor
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Presentation
4/4
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2
4
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Structure appropriateness
Excellent
D.2Layout considerations
Good
Criteria Feedback
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