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IB Chinese A Lang & Lit SL Extended Essay Example
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浅析霍达的小说《穆斯林的葬礼》中“玉”和“月”意象的悲剧建构
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18/28
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Criteria A: Focus and Method
2/6
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3
6
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A.1
Topic communication and clarity
Poor
A.2
Research question focus and appropriateness
Poor
A.3
Methodology completeness and effectiveness
Poor
Criteria Feedback
You show some evidence of research through footnotes and a bibliography-like source list.
The document appears to have an intended report structure with page numbering and sectioning features.
Your topic, purpose, and line of inquiry are not readable in the submitted version, so the investigation is not clearly communicated.
The research question cannot be recovered clearly enough to show that the discussion stays focused on a narrow, coherent issue.
Your source selection and method cannot be properly evaluated because most of the substantive text and citation details are not legible.
Criteria B: Knowledge and Understanding
2/6
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3
6
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B.1
Knowledge of topic and sources
Poor
B.2
Use of terminology and concepts
Poor
Criteria Feedback
Your bibliography-like ending suggests you consulted published material rather than relying only on unsupported opinion.
The use of citations indicates an attempt to anchor the work in external evidence.
The topic knowledge in the body of the essay cannot be judged properly because the Chinese text is not legible in the submitted file.
Subject-specific terminology and concepts are not visible clearly enough to show accurate and consistent use.
Source details are corrupted or incomplete, so the quality and relevance of your knowledge base cannot be confirmed.
Criteria C: Critical Thinking
10/12
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6
12
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C.1
Research quality and relevance
Poor
C.2
Analysis depth and effectiveness
Poor
C.3
Discussion and evaluation
Poor
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Presentation
4/4
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2
4
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D.1
Structure appropriateness
Moderate
D.2
Layout and formatting
Poor
Criteria Feedback
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