To what extent has the decision of Dunkin Donuts to rebrand to Dunkin affect its market leadership position within the years of 2017 to 2022SL
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Official IB Result
IB Grade: B
Criteria A: Focus and Method
4/6
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3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Topic communication and explanation
Moderate
A.2Research question formulation and focus
Moderate
A.3Research methodology
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
- You state a clear research question that keeps the investigation anchored to Dunkin’s rebrand and its intended business effect.
- You generally keep the discussion connected to the chosen company and time frame.
- You justify the use of a range of secondary sources and show some awareness of source limitations.
- The key term in the question is not defined precisely enough, so the investigation shifts between different meanings of market leadership.
- The time frame is not fully consistent throughout the report.
- The method would be stronger if you explained more clearly how sources were selected and how competitor data were checked.
Criteria B: Knowledge and Understanding
4/6
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3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Application of source material
Moderate
B.2Subject knowledge
Moderate
B.3Use of terminology and concepts
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
- You show clear understanding of relevant business ideas such as branding, positioning, market share, and competitive advantage.
- You generally use terminology accurately and explain several strategic tools in a way that is understandable.
- You link much of the source material to the discussion rather than leaving it isolated.
- Some concepts are applied imprecisely, especially when financial measures are treated as if they directly show market leadership.
- The essay does not consistently reconcile overlapping ideas such as cost leadership and differentiation.
- Some evidence is relevant but does not always support the exact claim being made.
Criteria C: Critical Thinking
11/12
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6
12
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Research quality
Poor
C.2Analysis depth
Poor
C.3Discussion and evaluation
Poor
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Presentation
3/4
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2
4
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Structure appropriateness
Good
D.2Layout and formatting
Good
Criteria Feedback
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