To what extent has Fenty Beauty’s focus on inclusivity through marketing and product innovation contributed to its rapid success in the global cosmetics industry?SL
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Official IB Result
IB Grade: A
Criteria A: Focus and Method
5/6
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3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Topic communication and explanation
Excellent
A.2Research question formulation and focus
Good
A.3Research methodology
Good
Criteria Feedback
- The student's investigation has a clear central question and the topic is communicated effectively from the start.
- The student defines success in a way that helps guide the discussion and makes the case study easy to follow.
- The student's method shows thoughtful source selection and an awareness of limitations in the evidence base.
- The question is a little too broad because it combines several outcomes and overlapping drivers.
- Some background material is interesting but not tightly linked to the specific investigation.
- The method would be stronger if the student explained more precisely how they compared evidence and applied their frameworks.
Criteria B: Knowledge and Understanding
5/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Application of source material
Good
B.2Subject knowledge
Good
B.3Use of terminology and concepts
Good
Criteria Feedback
- The student demonstrates clear understanding of key business ideas such as differentiation, product development, market expansion, competitive advantage, and VRIO.
- The student's use of examples from Fenty Beauty is usually relevant and helps ground the discussion in the case study.
- The student generally uses business terminology accurately and coherently.
- Some classifications are not fully secure, especially where separate Rihanna-related ventures are treated as part of Fenty Beauty.
- A few claims are broader than the evidence supports, particularly around R&D and some pricing or accessibility points.
- Several concepts are applied in a way that is clear but not always fully precise or measurable.
Criteria C: Critical Thinking
10/12
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6
12
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Research quality
Moderate
C.2Analysis depth
Moderate
C.3Discussion and evaluation
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Presentation
3/4
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2
4
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Structure appropriateness
Good
D.2Layout and formatting
Good
Criteria Feedback
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