To what extent did the Vacation Rental Management Companies adapt their Business strategies to compete with Airbnb in the Spanish market and remain competitive?SL
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B
Overall Score
18/28
Criteria A: Focus and Method
4/6
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3
6
Criteria Strands
A.1Topic communication and explanation
Moderate
A.2Research question formulation and focus
Moderate
A.3Research methodology
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
- Your research question is clearly stated and your essay stays recognisably connected to that question throughout.
- You use a relevant range of business frameworks and show awareness of how Airbnb changed the competitive environment.
- Your introduction gives useful context and helps the reader understand the market you are studying.
- Your scope is still too broad because the investigation does not clearly define a tight sample of companies, regions, or time period.
- The method would be stronger if you justified why each source and framework was chosen for this investigation.
- The title, question, and discussion are not always aligned with the same level of precision.
Criteria B: Knowledge and Understanding
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
B.1Application of source material
Moderate
B.2Subject knowledge
Moderate
B.3Use of terminology and concepts
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
- You show clear knowledge of the vacation-rental market and the role Airbnb plays within it.
- You use business terminology accurately in many places, including ideas such as differentiation, bargaining power, and competitive advantage.
- You apply source material in relevant ways to support points about regulation, commissions, and market pressure.
- Some claims are too general and are not always supported by sufficiently specific evidence.
- The essay sometimes relies on weaker or self-interested sources, which limits the strength of the knowledge being presented.
- The terminology is mostly accurate, but there are places where concepts are not used with enough precision or consistency.
Criteria C: Critical Thinking
8/12
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6
12
Criteria Strands
C.1Research quality
Moderate
C.2Analysis depth
Moderate
C.3Discussion and evaluation
Poor
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Presentation
2/4
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2
4
Criteria Strands
D.1Structure appropriateness
Good
D.2Layout and formatting
Good
Criteria Feedback
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