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La identidad del Mago de Oz como símbolo de engaño en la película Wicked: Parte I
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Official IB Result
IB Grade: 7
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Criteria A: Knowledge, Understanding and Interpretation
4/5
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5
Criteria Strands
Pro
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A.1
Knowledge and understanding of the work/text
Excellent
A.2
Use of references and textual support
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
The student shows secure knowledge of the text and keeps their discussion anchored in the Wizard’s constructed identity.
The student uses relevant quotations and film details to support their interpretation.
The student consistently connects evidence to ideas about power, manipulation, and deception.
Some points are broad and would be stronger with more precise textual evidence.
The range of supporting references is somewhat limited.
A few references could be integrated with slightly more nuance to make the interpretation more persuasive.
Criteria B: Analysis and Evaluation
4/5
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B.1
Analysis of textual features and author's choices
Good
Criteria Feedback
The student makes clear links between film techniques and their effects on meaning.
The student moves beyond description in several places to explain what the Wizard’s language and behaviour reveal.
The student shows an effective understanding of how rhetoric can disguise control as guidance.
Some technique-based comments are identified correctly but not fully developed.
A few analytical points remain a little general or asserted rather than closely unpacked.
The student could say more about how specific cinematic choices shape the viewer’s response.
Criteria C: Focus, Organization and Development
4/5
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3
5
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Pro
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C.1
Organization and development of ideas
Excellent
C.2
Integration of supporting examples
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Language
5/5
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3
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D.1
Language clarity and accuracy
Good
D.2
Register and style appropriateness
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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